My Story
Ema is a little girl that longed to go to the forest. Daisy is Ema’s mom.Groomtap is Ema’s dad. He’s from Africa. Max is Ema’s adopted dog. Sassy is Max’s sister. Twinkle is the fairy of the enchanted forest.
Ema And The Enchanted Forest
Ema lived in a house in the city. The city was so dirty and smelly. And there was a hidden forest far away that Daisy didn’t tell Ema about.
Ema looked out the window. And said, “Is there a life better than this?” Her mom told her no. And Ema felt so sad she went straight to her room! She saw a dog on the street from her bedroom window. It was alone! Ema asked Daisy if she could get the dog and her mom said,“No! Pets are messy and dirty!” Ema couldn’t help it. She got the dog herself. The dog was so happy to see that he had her to take care of him! She made a dog bed for her dog, she fed her dog, and even brushed her dog. Her dog was no ordinary dog. He could think as well as a human! The dog drew a picture of a forest and wrote, “Go to this forest. It’s my home! I need to find it. It’s close to the volcano Graspa!”?Ema could not believe her eyes! The picture the dog drew was amazing! Ema said, “I’ll help you get to your forest!”
Part 2
Ema and her dog snuck outside. Ema did not ask permission because she knew that Daisy and her dad would say no. Ema said, “Theres no map!”?The dog handed her a map of the forest. Ema said, “We do have a map. Let’s go!”
Ema walked to the train station. When she got there, guards were standing on each side of the entrance. She hid from them. She went into the train station without being seen, by the help of her dog. Without paying, she got in the train that goes to the forest. It took three days to get there. Ema brought food for her dog and herself. On the train a stranger looked at Ema and said, “Want some candy?” And Ema said, “No thanks.” The dog barked at the stranger and wrote, “He wants to kidnap you!”?Ema screamed. The guards in the train arrested him and put him in the train prison. When they got to the forest train station, Ema did not like the city a tiny bit.
At home, Daisy and Groompat called out, “Ema! Ema!” They were looking for Ema. The dog gave the map of the forest to Ema. Ema said ,“It will take two days to get to your home dog!” The dog said, “I don’t want to be called dog! My real name is Max.” Ema agreed and continued her journey to Max’s home. Ema pitched a tent for her and Max to sleep in.
Part 3
Ema woke up in the morning with the best sleep she’d ever had, the birds were singing the most beautiful songs, and there was the best air you could ever breathe. After Ema had her exercise, Max woke up. “Good morning,” he said. Ema could understand Max without writing! Now she knew dog language! Ema got out some food from her bag. Apples, pears, and strawberries. “Breakfast!” Ema called out. Max and Ema loved the forest. After breakfast they put away their things and moved on. Ema saw a tiger and said,“Look how beautiful this animal is!”Max said,“That animal is dangerous too!” They ran and ran, and the tiger was out of sight. After running, they saw in a far distance the volcano. They couldn’t wait to go there. They marched down the tall mountain. The mountain had a big hollow tree ,“it is 1000 years old” the dog said. It was getting dark and Emma and Max were growing tired. They pitched their tents and then drifted to sleep.
Part 4
The next morning they had a quick breakfast. Ema said ,“it will take 1 hour to get to the volcano, Graspa.” They continued their journey again to Max’s home. They came upon an Indian village with black Indians. The Indians said,“Why did you come here?” Ema was so scared. She hid in the bushes. The Indian guards stepped into the village. Ema and Max tiptoed around the village and found one other dog! Max was so happy. That dog was his sister! Max danced, and wiggled, and barked. He was so happy! Sassy, Max’s sister said ,“Let’s go home. Our family is waiting for us!” They passed all trees and all trunks until they got home. Max and Sassy ran up to their home and barked louder than ever, and jumped the highest in the world, and smiled the happiest faces. Ema was glad to see that Max was home and he was okay.
Part 5
Ema said the biggest goodbye to max and walked home. While she was walking, she saw a rescue helicopter. The helicopter landed next to Ema. Ema ran away and saw wands growing on a tree. She picked one. Another wand grew in it’s place. She saw a fairy that had sparkling wings. The fairy said, “I’m twinkle. You discovered the enchanted part of the forest! Don’t tell anyone about it or else you will forget everything good in your life. I will teach you how to use your wand. Think what you want to do and then say it! Bye.” Ema saw a fairy! She did what the fairy said. She made a portal with her wand to her home. She walked in the portal, and she was home! Ema ran to her mom and dad and they said,“Where have you been?” Ema said, “I was sleeping.” Ema’s parents were confused. Ema put herself in the closet and then made a new dog. Ema said, “Make this dog disappear every time my parents come!” Then a whole new story came.
THE END
I made up this story.
What an exciting story, Emily! It is interesting and fun to read about Ema and Max. I think I would like to find the enchanted forest and get a fairy wand myself 🙂
What an entertaining story Emily! I really enjoyed reading it, and can’t wait to read more stories that you write. I like how you told who the different characters were at the beginning. I especially liked your fun details and descriptions. I thought the portal idea was cool, and also that the new dog could disappear whenever her parents came. 🙂 What a great imagination you have!
You are a very creative story teller! I’m glad that you enjoy writing and telling stories.
I tried sending a comment from my iphone…but I see it didn’t work for me , so I’ll comment here.
I really enjoyed reading your story Emily. I think you have a nice for writing.
You have a wonderful imagination. Ema had such neat experiences on her adventure. I’m glad she was so kind and helpful to Max and so happy he found his sister.I was relieved and happy to learn that Ema returned home safely.
I’m glad you all like my story. 😀
I loved your story! It was great! :). I miss you! But I can’t wait to see you on the cruise ship:).but it is going to be a longtime :(. I love you!